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The Ellington Kid
The Ellington Kid
The narrative structure of The Ellington Kid deviates from a typical short film format by alternating between the present and flashbacks. It opens with two friends, Nathan and Beefy, in a kebab shop, where Nathan begins telling a story about a stabbing incident. The film then shifts between Nathan recounting the story and flashbacks depicting the event. The film ends with a dark yet humorous twist, implying that Beefy may be unknowingly eating human flesh in his burger.
Editing : the editing alternates between fast-paced, jumpy cuts and slower, more lingering sequences that heighten the sense of dread. For instance, the slow, extended shot of the kid stumbling into the kebab shop contrasts sharply with the quicker cuts elsewhere, emphasizing the gravity of the moment and building suspense. The film adheres to continuity editing principles, like the Kuleshov effect, which enhances realism by creating connections between the shop worker’s knife and the gang members’ reactions. This approach immerses viewers in the film’s world and reinforces its verisimilitude.
Sound : Sound is used to enhance the film's tension and emotional impact. The film opens with the sharp, high-frequency sound of a knife being sharpened, immediately grabbing attention. During the chase scene, sound builds suspense, with the soundtrack intensifying the emotional stakes. When the kebab shop worker locks the gang members in, the music shifts from tense to a nearly blissful synth arrangement, signaling a sense of closure. However, as the film nears its end, the music abruptly turns harsh and discordant for a moment before cutting back to the present, hinting at the dark events that occurred off-screen.
Over
Over

The title Over carries a dual meaning. On one hand, it symbolizes the end of something, fitting as the film unfolds in reverse, showing events from the conclusion to the beginning until the man’s tragic fate is revealed. On the other hand, it suggests something falling from "overhead," which aligns with the man’s fall from above. Based on a true story, the film recounts a man who fell to his death from a British Airways flight while hiding in the plane’s wheel well. The moment of his fall is deeply unsettling, made more disturbing by the fact that it really happened.

Slap
Slap

Slap (dir. Nick Rowland) follows Connor, a teenage boy struggling with self-expression through makeup and feminine clothing, while also being a respected boxer in his hypermasculine community. Set in a rough area of Liverpool, the film opens with Connor secretly applying makeup, only to panic and hide when his father calls him. This is contrasted with scenes of him boxing, highlighting the conflict between his true self and societal expectations. As Connor grows more confident, he attends a party in women's clothing, but his friends dismiss it as a joke, leading to frustration. Betrayed by his friend Archie and rejected by his girlfriend Lola, Connor's internal turmoil culminates in a violent outburst in the boxing ring, where he unleashes his pent-up rage on his opponent.
Mise-en-scene : The gloomy, dull setting reflects both the realistic weather and Connor's bleak outlook on his life, where he feels trapped in an identity he's expected to own. This contrasts with vibrant pops of colour when Connor expresses his true self in feminine clothing, symbolizing freedom and authenticity. The use of colour is expressionistic, mirroring the emotions of the characters. In the boxing room, the dominant red tones represent both bravery and anger, highlighting the internal conflict Connor faces.

Arrival
Arrival

"The Arrival" (2016), directed by Daniel Montanarini, is a short film about a pregnant woman named Anna, who is in a café deciding whether to order decaf or caffeinated coffee. This seemingly minor choice mirrors her larger, pivotal decision about whether to keep her baby. Through her internal monologue, the film explores the significance of this choice and the emotional weight it carries. Inspired by Montanarini's documentary "All About Mothers" and a photograph by Alexander Nesterov, the film delves into the complexities of Anna's decision-making process.

Mise-en-scene : Mise-en-scene plays a crucial role in this film, using setting, costume, and extras to convey deeper meaning. The café setting, with its coffee cup, booths, and menu, establishes Anna’s place in the story. She is highlighted by bright lighting against a darkened background, drawing attention to her white t-shirt and pale skin, emphasizing her role as the main character. The cafe’s design, resembling a train carriage with curved lamps and windows, serves as a metaphor for Anna's journey through her pregnancy and decision-making. Subtle choreography of extras adds layers to her internal thoughts—for instance, an old woman near a clock reminds Anna of her biological clock, while a couple entering triggers thoughts about her own relationship. These small details, while understated, enhance the film’s depth on multiple viewings.
Cinematography and Editing : editing and cinematography are minimal. The entire film is one continuous shot with no cuts, allowing full focus on Anna's dialogue and performance. It begins with a shot behind a blurred glass door, creating a sense of mystery as we can only glimpse a figure moving behind it. When the door opens, the camera slowly dollies in, moving from wide to mid-shot, and finally to a close-up, building tension as Anna debates her decision about the baby. At the pivotal moment, when she decides to keep the baby, the camera remains in a close-up, only pulling back slowly when the man she was waiting for arrives. However, the camera stays focused on Anna, never revealing the man’s face, leaving his identity a mystery.
Echo
Echo

"Echo" tells the story of 17-year-old Caroline, who begins the short film by receiving a call about her father's motorcycle accident. Her distress prompts help from passers-by, but things take a turn when Caroline leaves the scene, revealing her calls are fake and part of a reenactment of her father's death. The film presents various reactions from strangers, highlighting how they respond to her deceit. It explores the impact of her father's death on her family, feeding viewers important details while leaving some open to interpretation. The short challenges us to decide whether to be appalled by Caroline's manipulation or empathetic toward her plea for help, and concludes with an open-ended narrative.

Operator
Operator

"Operator" is a 2015 short film written and directed by Caroline Bartleet. Set in an emergency call center, it centers on a 999 operator handling a distress call about a fire in a woman's home. The caller, Gemma, has discovered a blaze in her house and, to make matters worse, her son Jamie is trapped upstairs. The film presents the situation from the operator’s perspective, Laura, as she manages the high-stress and frightening circumstances. Eventually, both Gemma and Jamie are rescued from the fire, and the call concludes. We then see Laura take a moment to breathe before preparing for the next emergency call.

Performance : Performance is crucial to this film. Since we never leave the call center, the reality of the fire is entirely conveyed by the actors. The film relies heavily on mid shots and close-ups, which accentuate the nuances and subtleties of Kate Dickie’s facial expressions. Kate rises to the occasion, vividly portraying the harrowing situation with a blend of outward calmness and underlying intense stress. Vicky McClure, who plays Gemma, is a voice actor in this film. While one might think this would be easier as it eliminates concerns about facial expressions, it actually presents a greater challenge. Vicky has to convey the gravity of the situation solely through her voice, without the aid of body language or facial expressions. She succeeds brilliantly, delivering a performance that is both terrifying and genuinely distressing, keeping me on the edge of my seat throughout.
Sound : Sound plays a crucial role in "Operator," as the film relies on it to convey its story without needing action scenes. Since we never see Gemma or the fire, and the narrative is confined to the call center, the story is communicated entirely through Gemma's phone call. To enhance realism, the film applies a muffled, telephone effect to Gemma's voice and uses similarly muted foley for the fire's crackling as it spreads. At the film’s conclusion, only Laura's deep, labored breaths are audible, and their increased volume underscores the intense and distressing nature of the experience.
StoryBoard and Shotlist
This is the Storyboard and shotlist for my short film, (it starts from the bottom of the document because of formatting issues)

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